Keeping Promises

 

| REASON | BREAK | STAY | GIVE | RAIN |

{I chose poetry to answer this challenge –five words repeat in five stanzas}

 

Give me a break

Let me stay

The reason I can’t go

I don’t like the rain.

 

Rain, rain stay away

Mother sang a reason

Give us sunshine

A break from the clouds.

 

The rainbow stays

Reminds of the reason

God does not break

The promise he gives after rain.

 

Break the mood

Of rain drops falling

Give me a reason

You will stay.

 

Break bread with me love

Stay while the rain gives reason

And we wait for the promise

of the rainbow.

{Click here to take you to the challenge at  the Secret Keeper.}

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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5 thoughts on “Keeping Promises

  1. I like the way you used free verse and with each stanza you incorporate the 5 words. It is playful and the words trip off the tongue as the reader gets to hear the words read in their head or out loud. You challenged the challenge with an interested twist. I like your ingenuity. – jk

  2. I like the way you used free verse and with each stanza you incorporate the 5 words. It is playful and the words trip off the tongue as the reader gets to hear the words read in their head or out loud. You challenged the challenge with an interesting twist. I like your ingenuity. – jk

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